Wednesday 14 September 2016

The Wonderful and Unforgettable Adventure


The Wonderful and Unforgettable Adventure

There once was a blueberry named Josh who lived in a museum. Josh was always dressed very well, he had all the rare fossils in his very own home. But one day he goes on a mysterious adventure, so let's begin our adventure.

One scorching hot day a blueberry named Josh was in his museum. He had all of the rare fossils is his home the museum. But suddenly the doorbell rang ding dong ding dong Josh went to the door and opened the door. Hello my name is Rose the strawberry how are you doing today? I am the delivery girl and this package came from the U.S.A. Josh said ok what is it? and Rose replied I'm not sure so you have to find out. Josh replied ok I will then. Rose handed Josh the package and Josh brought it inside.

Josh put the package on the table and went to make breakfast. Three minutes later Josh came back and opened the package. He looked inside and said WOW! This is an amazing dinosaur bone, Josh grabbed the dinosaur bone carefully and popped it onto a pedestal. Later that night Josh went to bed he was so tired  he forgot to lock his door so people could not enter.

When Josh woke up he went to the kitchen to make some breakfast. But when he finished his breakfast he was in shock the bone has gone. Josh was panicking but he put himself together and started looking of clues. He looked around his house and he found some footprints he followed them but then they stopped in a big pile of dirt. Josh ran back inside his house to grab a shovel, and started to dig. The bone was at the bottom of the hole he grabbed it and went back inside and washed it. As soon as he finished washing the bone he notices something on the back of the bone it was a map he put it back on the pedestal and went to investigate the hole the bone was buried in.

He dug for a long time and and found something he grabbed the item and looked at it it was a key he brought it inside and washed it he wonder what it would open. He popped it in his little box and went to read a book. Two hours later night hit, this time he looked the door and went to bed.

The next morning he went to the shops to buy some food. But on his way past he noticed something and apple sneaking into the building. Josh followed him quietly the apple put down a shiny object  Josh hid behind a crate and the apple left. Josh went to investigate. What object did the apple put down? It was a little diamond. Josh noticed the diamond was dusty so he grabbed a cloth out of his pocket and polished it. While Josh was polishing the diamond the diamond opened up. Josh looked inside the diamond and it was another map. Josh was so confused he didn't know what this meant so he took out his camera and took a photo. Josh snuck back out the door and went home with his shopping.

A few hours later Josh was home. Then he went to print the photo of the diamond. When the photo had finish printing Josh grabbed it and went to the bone that had a map on it. He compered the two maps and they were different. Then he decided to follow the maps. He will start with the map that was on the bone. But suddenly the doorbell rang. Ding dong ding dong. Josh opened the door and an orange was at the door. The orange said in a cheery voice hello my name is Tommy but you can call me Tom if you want to.

Jost replied hi my name is Josh and why are you here? Tommy replied I'm here because I'm giving away free drink bottles would you like some. Josh replied yes please. Tommy asked how many would you like? Josh replied four thank you. Tommy handed Josh four drink bottles you never know it might come in handy now back to the story so where was I oh yes Tommy handed Josh four drink bottles and said bye it's nice meeting you. Josh replied it's nice meeting you to.

Josh stored the drink bottles in his cupboard. Then went to get ready for his expedition. He grabbed his big bag and started to put all the items he need to take on his expedition. Josh grabbed nonperishable food a sleeping bag, tent, spare clothes and he grabbed his four drink bottles and filled them up with water. See I told you they would come in handy now back to the story. Josh also grabbed pillows blankets, camera and his teddy bear called Mr Fluffy Muffins to keep him company. Then the bone that had the map on it and also the key. But then Josh noticed something on the bone it said U.S.A that's it Josh said I must go to the United States Of America. I will leave tomorrow morning. Josh went to do the dishes and soon as Josh finished doing the dishes night hit. Josh went to bed and went to sleep. But don't worry Josh did lock the door this time ok now let's get back to the story.

The next morning Josh woke up. He got out of bed and went to have breakfast. When he finished having his breakfast he grabbed his bag and his tent and made his way to the door. As soon as Josh opened the door he found a little box. He opened it and a little toy bunny was in it and a card. The card read, this is for you Josh hope you like it love from Mum and Dad. Josh smiled and popped the bunny and the card is his bag, and made his way to his bright red car.

Two hours later Josh arrived at the airport. He grabbed his things and went in. Josh went up to the counter and said I would like a ticket to the United States Of America please. The carrot at the counter replied sure here you go. Josh replied thank you and went to the seating area to wait for his flight.

After it seemed like forever Josh's flight arrived Josh got his bag checked and he went onto the plane. Josh put his bag and tent in the overhead locker then sat down and put his seatbelt on. After when everyone was on the plane the plane was about to take off. The captain said, good evening passengers. We hope your day has gone very well. This flight will take about 12 hours to get there so make yourself comfortable and enjoy the trip. Josh turned on the t.v that was in front of him and watched some movies. After two movies the refreshments came around, the tomato that was pushing the refreshments around said to Josh hello would you like some refreshments. Josh replied yes please, the tomato replied what would you like. Josh replied can I please have a biscuit please. Here you go said the tomato. Josh replied back saying thank you and the tomato said your welcome. Josh ate his biscuit and looked outside the window and he noticed night has fallen so Josh went to sleep.

The next bright and sunny morning Josh asked the banana for some breakfast. The banana said here you go. Josh replied thank you and ate his breakfast. When Josh has finished his breakfast, the captain said good morning passengers. I'm sorry if I woke you up. But we are almost at the U.S.A. Just a few more hours and we are there. Josh watched two more movies and when the movies were finished dinner came. The cucumber asked Josh what he would like to eat? Josh replied spaghetti and a cake for dessert. The cucumber said here you go. Josh replied thank you. The cucumber said your welcome. Josh ate his dinner and dessert and went to sleep because night has awaken.

When Josh woke up the captain said good morning passengers. I'm sorry if I woke you up again. But we are just about to land in the U.S.A. I hope you enjoyed this trip and thank you for your time. Three minutes later the plane landed. Josh grabbed his bag and tent and went thank the pilot. Then got off the plane. Josh walked out of the airport with his bag and tent. Then Josh asked a taxi to drive him to a hotel. A few minutes later the taxi arrived at a hotel. Josh got out of the taxi and payed the taxi driver. Then said thank you for the ride. He went inside the hotel. Josh went to the lettuce at the counter and said can I please have a room. The lettuce at the counter replied sure that will be $7.50 please. Here you go replied Josh. Thank you here is your room key, said the lettuce.

Josh walked up the stairs and went onto the 5th floor, and walked to room 513. Josh went in and it was amazing. Josh went straight onto the bed and got his teddy and bunny out of his bag. Then went to bed because night has fallen.

The next day it was expedition day. Josh woke up and grabbed his bag and his tent and walked out of his room and said goodbye to his teddy Mr Fluffy Muffins and his bunny. Then locked his room door and went down stairs. When Josh reached to bottom he went out the door and walked to a shop to have breakfast.

When Josh finished his breakfast he asked the taxi driver to take him to the car shop. A few minutes later the taxi arrived at the car shop. Josh payed the taxi and went into the car shop. He went in. According to the map on the bone it says to go through the back door then go into the basement. So Josh went into the basement and looked at the map on the bone. The arrow is pointing to the wall but all Josh saw in front of him was a big box. But then an idea popped into Josh's head. Josh's idea was to move the box. So Josh started to move the box and Josh saw with his very own eyes a door. He opened it and he found a another key Josh grabbed the key and popped it into his bag and moved the box back to the place he found them. Then Josh makes his way out of the basement and out the back door the out the front door.

Then Josh called another taxi and asked if the taxi can take him back to the hotel. Wow Josh is asking so much taxis to drive him everywhere. Alright back to the story ok so where was I oh yes the taxi drove Josh back to the hotel. Josh payed the taxi driver and we inside the hotel. Then went into the elevator and clicked floor five. A few seconds later the elevator arrived at floor five. Josh got out of the elevator and walked to room 513. When Josh entered the room he hugged his teddy and his bunny and smile. Then Josh popped his bag down then took out the key and washed it.

Now night has fallen and it is Josh's bed time. Josh said good night teddy and goodnight bunny see you in the morning. The next  day Josh followed the map that was on the diamond. But no he didn't take the taxi this time so was I oh yes Josh was walking down the streets following the photo of the map that was on the diamond. Josh walked and walked and walked until he stopped at a mountain. Josh started to climb he climbed and climbed and climbed until he reached a cave. Josh went in. He started walking in the dark but fell in a hole after going five metres in the cave. Josh looked up. Then he looked at himself. Josh was surprise that he was not squished. He was still in one piece with is good. Josh stood up and looked around. It was so dark but he saw a tunnel that was lite. Josh followed the light it was getting brighter and brighter. Josh stopped. He almost fell down a canyon. Josh was in big shock Josh saw something on the other side of the canyon. Josh said here goes nothing and Josh took a leap of faith. Josh clinged onto the edge of the canyon, he pulled himself up. He took a breath. Josh went up to the shiny object. It was another key. Josh was confused he didn't know what this meant. Josh turned around and took another leap of faith Josh clinged onto the edge again and walked into the darken. But he didn't know how to get out of this hole he was stuck in.

The hole was one metre deep sand Josh didn't pack a rope or a ladder. Then Josh decided to look of items that would help him to get out of the hole. But it was so dark Josh couldn't see a thing. So used his hands instead. Josh mostly felt cold rock but then he felt something. He grabbed it and popped it into his pocket. But then he felt something else. Josh grabbed it and went to the tunnel where the light was. Josh looked at the item in hands. It was an old ladder. Josh went back to the into the dark and pot the ladder against a rock. Then started to climb. As soon as Josh got to the top he walked out the cave. Then Josh walked back home in the dark. When he got back to the hotel Josh went to the elevator. He push the button for floor five. A few seconds later the elevator arrived on the 5th floor. Josh walked to room 513. Josh walked in room 513 and took off his bag a went to sleep with Mr Fluffy Muffins and his bunny.

The next morning Josh woke up. He went downstairs to have breakfast. When Josh had finished his breakfast he went back to his room. He grabbed the item he had found in the dark last night. Josh looked at the item. It was another map. Well I guess I am going on another adventure. Josh grabbed his bag and his tent and the three keys. Josh put the keys in his pocket. Then went downstairs. When Josh reached the bottom he went out the door and went to a shop to buy a rope and a torch. Because if you remember last night, Josh couldn't get out of the hole he was stuck in.  He couldn't see anything. Alright back to the story.  Josh exited the shop and followed the map he had found in the hole he was stuck in. Josh followed the map until he stopped at a tree. Josh saw a little gap is the tree. Josh crawled in. A few seconds later Josh was in the tree. The tree was hollow. Josh stood up and started to walk but suddenly the floor collapsed. Josh was falling fast. He didn't know what to do. Josh was panicking so much he was not thinking straight. Suddenly Josh landed on the ground. Josh opened his eyes, he was not squashed which was good. Josh stood up and looked around. He was  underground and it was very dark. Josh took the torch out of his bag and turned it on. He looked around and saw three tunnels. Josh said to himself which way should I go. Josh took a wild guess and took the right tunnel. He walked in. But then Josh heard a sound and turned around. The rock were falling and blocking Josh's way out. Josh tired to get out but it was too late. So Josh carried on walking through the tunnel. The tunnel got brighter and brighter until Josh stopped because lava was right in front of him. Josh saw some stepping stones.  Josh had an idea to jump to each stepping stone one by one. So Josh jumped on the stepping stones one by one. Josh was being very careful. Suddenly Josh was on the last stepping stone, Josh jumped and almost fell in the lava but Josh made it.

Josh kept on walking through the tunnel then he saw light. Josh walked towards the light. Then a beautiful land appeared before his eyes. Josh could not believe what was down here. Josh walked through the peaceful land. Then Josh saw a shiny object.  Josh slowly walked towards the shiny object. Josh approached the shiny object. Josh looked at it and it was a golden door attached to some shiny walls. Josh tried to open the door but it was locked. Then Josh noticed the key holes on the door. Then Josh took out the three keys out of his pocket. Then popped them all in the key holes one by one. When Josh finished putting all the keys in the key holes Josh started to turn the keys. Then suddenly the door opened. Josh went inside and Josh was amazed. Right before his very own eyes a spectacular land with mixed berries running around and having fun. Also there were kiwifruits who looked after the little mixed berries. Josh was so amazed. But then Josh noticed the big castle in the background. Josh walked towards the castle and saw that there were pineapples guarding the entrance. Josh asked if he could come in. The pineapples said very well and let Josh in. Josh went up to the cherry that was sitting on the throne. Josh said hello your fruitiness my name is Josh. Then the cherry said hello I am Queen cherry. I have lost my necklace. Can you find it for me. Josh replied of course your fruitiness I will. Queen cherry said thank you. Here take this. What is it you ask. Can you guess what it is? Alright back to the story. Queen cherry gave Josh a map. Wow Josh is receiving lots of maps. Ok so where was I. Oh yes. Queen cherry gave Josh a map it will guide you to the place where the evil witch took my necklace. Good luck. Josh replied I won't let you down your fruitiness. Then Josh left.

Josh followed the map for an hour. He was not there yet. So Josh set up his tent. Then had a drink and ate some food. Then went to sleep in his sleeping bag. The next morning Josh woke up bright and early. Then set off to the witch's  house. A few minutes later Josh had finally arrived at  the witch's house. Josh went inside and saw the witch in bed sleeping. Josh tipped toed around the witch's house quietly. Josh found a very big door. He open it and found Queen cherries necklace. Josh grabbed the necklace and went outside. But suddenly the witch's cat woke up and saw Josh. The cat woke the witch up. Then the witch said what is it cat. The cat lead the witch to Josh. The witch saw Josh holding the necklace. Then the witch shouted BRING THAT BACK NOW! Then Josh ran a fast as he could. Suddenly the witch waved her wand and said the magic words. Abracadabra wind and mud make this berry go in a cup. Then the magic came out of the wand. It was about to hit Josh but Josh ducked. Then the magic spell hit the witch's mirror and the spell shot back at the witch and the cat. Josh was saved. So Josh followed the map back to the castle and gave the Queen back her necklace. Josh said here you go your fruitiness. Queen cherry replied thank you. How can I repay you. Josh replied, oh there is no need your fruitiness. Queen cherry said thank you for unlocking the door. The witch locked us up for days. But thanks to you we now have more room. Josh said no problem. Now I will be going home. Thank you your fruitiness. Then Queen cherry said wait I can help you get home. Here eat this piece of candy and you will soon be home. Josh said thank you your fruitiness. Josh said bye to everyone. Hope we can see each other again.  Josh ate the candy. A few seconds later Josh was in the hotel. Josh packed his teddy Mr Fluffy Muffins and his bunny and went down stairs. When Josh reached the bottom his gave the lettuce at the counter his key and said thank you and left.

Then Josh asked a taxi to drive him to the airport. A few minutes later Josh was at the airport. He went to the mandarin at the counter and asked for a ticket. The mandarin at the counter replied sure here you go. Josh said thank you and went to take a seat. Again it took forever for Josh's plane to arrive. Josh walked on the plane and put his bag and tent in the overhead locker. Then Josh sat down and put his seatbelt on. The captain said good evening passengers. We hope your day has gone very well. It will take a few hour and  days to get there. Hope you have a nice flight. Then Josh watched one movie and went to sleep. When Josh woke up the refreshments came around. Josh asked the plum for a glass of water. Here you go said the plum. Josh replied thank you. Josh drank his glass of water then the captain said good evening passengers we are almost in

The next morning Josh asked the brussel spout for some breakfast. When Josh finished his breakfast he watched two movies then dinner came around. Josh asked the broccoli for some soup and some chocolate for dessert. When Josh finished his dinner night hit so Josh went to sleep. The captain said good evening passengers. We are just about to land in England thank you for your time. Suddenly the plane landed. Josh grabbed his bag and tent and walked out. On the way out Josh thanked the captain and walked of the plane. Then out of the airport. Josh drove his bright red car back home. Then Josh went inside. Josh was so happy to be home in his museum. Then Josh went to bed with his teddy Mr Fluffy Muffins and his bunny. Then Josh said to himself I think I will call my bunny Mr Cuddles Muffin.

But what happen to the witch and her cat you say. Well you will have to wait to find out…………

To Be Continue…………..

7 comments:

  1. Hi Amber,
    Wow this is a big piece of writing. I liked how you told me about the bunny and Josh because I have a rabbit but it died. Maybe next time you might try and use some speech marks when people talk.
    Jorja St Bernadettes School Chch

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  2. Hi Amber,
    your story is really long. I love that you have the Characters names funny. E.g Mr fluffy Muffins. It is very imaginative Amber! Next time you might want to look at your punctuation just in case. But great work Amber.

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  3. Hi Amber!
    May the Holy Trinity be with you on Christmas day!
    Love, Trinity

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  4. Hi I am nikoli from yaldhurst and I think this story is the best one I have ever seen in 10 years.

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  5. Oh wow! Kia ora Amber, My name is Jedi from rimu class. I really love your story.It is detailed I love it! I can't wait to see your next post keep up the great work!

    Jedi =)

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  6. Hi I am Gracie from yaldhurst model school. I love your story I love it! I think its really cool.From Gracie.

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  7. Hi Amber! I love your story and indeed it was an unforgettable adventure because your story was so wonderful. I think if i try to do that, I won't do it better then you. If you want to see my blog then here it is...
    http://ymsparwink.blogspot.co.nz/2017/02/this-week-in-rimu-we-have-been-learning.html

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