Wednesday 14 September 2016

The Intelligent Blueberry


     The Intelligent Blueberry

Millions of years ago there lived a Berry named Gardainia the Golden berry,Gardainia wasn't blue like the rest of her family,her skin was a richy, shiny Gold colour and it will even catch you recognition.
Gardainia lives at the 'National Museum of Natural History'.
You might be wondering how she ended up in the museum? Let me inform you.

 It was way back on January 12  Wednesday 1966,it was a scorching hot day
Gardainia had a very interesting daily to do list:
12:30pm Wake up
1:00pm  Breakfast ready
1:30pm Play on the berry phone
2:00pm lunch
2:30pm  A nap
3:00pm bath
3:30pm and so on….

But her brothers and sisters had a different life, it was pretty much the opposite,they had to go school,cook their own breakfast and they weren't even allowed on social media. You can really guess why Gadainia was treated differently because 1- She's the youngest and 2- She's GOLD

While Gardainia went for a nap she heard two men voices downstairs she got up and looked down, there was two mens in black and white tuxedos they looked like security guards from the 'National Museum of Natural History'.
She overheard that if her parents wanted 60,000 dollars if they can sell Gardainia at the Museum because of her Goldness.
Gardainia's parents were crying and they made a final decision and said "No" the mens were angry and rushed out of the house and went off.
Gardainia was relieved so she carried on sleeping.
While Gardainia was sleeping she heard a thump,she thought it was just a dream so she continued sleeping.
The next morning Gardainia woke up in a Glass box
To Be Continued…





9 comments:

  1. Hi Hingano
    I like your work. I like how you add commers. I think you cood add more commers. From Tyler1zk3@stbernadetteschch.school.nz

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  2. HEYYY Hingano,I like your to be continued...cool story and nice effort.did it take long?

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  3. Hiii Hingano!,
    its so funny how you put to be continued... nice story thoe keep it up.

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  4. Hi Hingano, I really enjoyed reading your story and thought it was a creative idea. I liked how you made Gardainia different from the others. Maybe next time you could think of a more interesting title for your story.

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  5. Hey Hingano, this blueberry is very Intelligent, when you said the musem guards came I thought it was so they could hire Gardainia as a tour guide. Funny. Please come to my blog http://stbsrheannad.blogspot.co.nz/

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  6. Hi Hingano this is very interesting, you have some very descriptive words.I would love to hear what you ill rite for the next story.

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  7. Wow! ngano that was a cool story I look forward at reading the other part
    I like how you made the special one lucky but the others busy doing chores or homework
    How long did it take you to wtire that story?

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  8. May the joyful spirit of Christmas be with you throughout this time of year

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  9. Hi there
    My name is grace and I am from yms I really liked this story about the intelligent blueberry it was really fun to read.

    From Grace
    YMS

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