We are learning about the audience who will view our blog.
Lots of different people view our blogs and we need to think about these people when we create content to go on the blog.
Welcome to Room Eight's Blog. We are a class of Year 6 and 7 students at St Bernadette's School in Christchurch New Zealand. This is a place where we will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. We would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, 9 May 2017
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Hi Room 8!
ReplyDeleteThis post was intriguing and also confusing. Could you please put the people that view your blog on this post as it was really confusing as to who viewed it.
Thank you!
Bella N
Hi Room 8,
ReplyDeleteThis post was confusing, could you please put the people in the blog so we can understand it more?
Thanks Lucy from Yaldhurst Model School.
Hi room 8,
ReplyDeleteThis post is very confusing, Could you please try and explain it more. Otherwise this sound like a very good post.
Bree
Yaldhurst model school
Hi Room 8,
ReplyDeleteMy name is mia from Yaldhurst Model school and I thought that this post was a little confusing but I think that you are trying to learn about the people that view your blog.
Hi My name is gracie from yaldhurst model school i really like your post i hope i can see more your cool posts. From Gracie
ReplyDeleteHi its Lauren from Yaldhurst school I like how you made the description clear but the Image is a bit confusing and I don't get it From Lauren.
ReplyDeletehi my chloe im from yaldhurst modal school. i hope you can keep posting cool post and this is little confusing but it is still cool
ReplyDeletei read the sentence it says We are learning about the audience who will view our blog.
ReplyDeleteLots of different people view our blogs and we need to think about these people when we create content to go on the blog. and i like i!
Hi My name Is Chloe and I am from south hornby school.You could finish what you posted so that people can write more comments.You could add who visits your blog.Have you worked with Mr Maddren If you have I have done one of those as well click on my name and it should take you to my blog and you can see what i have done like that.
ReplyDeleteWow. I like how you introduced the topic. Maybe, next time you could actually finish the post. I have done something like this at school before and I think it is cool.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Jacob and I am from south honrby school. Maybe next time you could have finished the work. This remind me when I did this with Mr Maddren.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Josiah and I am from south hornby school and maybe next time you could put more effort in it.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Nikora and maybe you could finish it off and you could maybe put some writing in there. Nice job
ReplyDeletehello from the other side my name is Tennessee and I come from South Hornby School. I really enjoyed your blog like how you say Lots of different people view our blogs but maybe you can tell me more
ReplyDeleteHi Room 8,
ReplyDeleteI liked this topic; we did this at our school. I like how in the picture, behind the lady was a world map. It gives you an idea that the whole world views your blog!
I hope you post more soon,
Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.
hey there its chloe from yaldhurst model school i really like this maybe you could write more.
ReplyDeleteHi I am Gracie from yaldhurst model school i really like your post maybe you could write more. But i hope i can see hope of your best post..
ReplyDeleteHi Room 8c my name is billie I go to yaldhurst model school
ReplyDeleteI don't really get your topic because you didn't explain what your blog post is maybe next time you can put more detail and you could explain more clearly thanks Billie.
can you update your blog please
ReplyDeleteHello im Elias from shs but id like if you added more writing.
ReplyDeleteHi i am Oliver from shs south hornby school. i think you did a good jod at it keep it up. and next time put some more colour in it. good jod room 8
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Nikora an I am from South hornby school and I think you did a good job but I think your blog post should be finished by now.
ReplyDeleteHey Guys,
ReplyDeleteI don't really get your topic because you didn't explain what your blog post is maybe next time you can put more detail and you could explain more clearly. And lots of different people view our blogs and we need to think about these people when we create content to go on the blog.
Hi I'm Divontae from South Hornby School. This is a great post because you put a picture in the middle and you had a decent background. Next time you could add a little bit more colour and
ReplyDeletemaybe some more pictures.
hi my name is Libby next time you need to pot some photos on there.
ReplyDeleteHi Room 8,
ReplyDeleteI hope to see some more posts from you soon!
Thanks,
Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.
This was confusing can you put more deatil next time
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